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Mark Crutchfield's avatar

Margaret, I’ve been sitting with this since lunchtime, waiting for a moment when I could be at my keyboard and give it the attention it deserves.

There’s something extraordinarily powerful here, especially knowing this isn’t your usual mode of writing.

It reads less like a poem and more like a long-withheld permission finally spoken out loud.

Line after line releases another kind of inherited apology — for the body, for survival, for speaking, for not being smaller than pain demanded.

What makes it beautiful isn’t ornament or technique, but the steadiness of the voice.

Nothing is asking to be forgiven here anymore.

It feels earned, honest, and quietly liberating — the kind of piece that doesn’t shout, but changes how you stand after reading it.

Beautifully powerful and raw.

Thank you for sharing and looking forward to more 😊

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Powerful AF

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